tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post925385760089380135..comments2009-07-23T19:50:31.930+05:30Achintya Guptahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08571169844443816793noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-14464337798454545632009-07-23T19:50:31.930+05:302009-07-23T19:50:31.930+05:30Share your links with http://www.zaroorathai.com for more traffic.http://www.Sahibaat.comhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12760714371706618468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-17339096365127515392009-06-14T03:21:44.781+05:302009-06-14T03:21:44.781+05:30Interesting plot... <br />Execution needed much more...Sudeep Bhaumickhttp://www.sudeepbhaumick.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-51444712125203126002009-05-28T18:40:43.323+05:302009-05-28T18:40:43.323+05:30@ bhu<br />thanks, but then what would be the fun, the whole crux is the second part of story. <br /><br />@ zapper for his second comment<br />bewildered at your surety :Pach_85http://www.blogger.com/profile/08571169844443816793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-71277896743818885222009-05-28T01:06:01.137+05:302009-05-28T01:06:01.137+05:30you didnt respond to zapper's second remark!!<br />abt the piece..pretty interesting in the begining.. wud hve been sufficient if had lost just one virginity at a time :P<br />but nice attempt and a great imagination :PBhushanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12370826336736151481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-3041982862947808982009-05-27T20:16:25.642+05:302009-05-27T20:16:25.642+05:30@ simply.. thanksach_85http://www.blogger.com/profile/08571169844443816793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-27944779552245043602009-05-26T08:47:49.883+05:302009-05-26T08:47:49.883+05:30Slightly predictable end.. Nevertheless, nicely written!!Simply Ridiculoushttp://jigarbpatel.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-11781901557134257382009-05-22T23:49:36.585+05:302009-05-22T23:49:36.585+05:30@ zapper...<br />I think you are right with the end waala part... but then it had to be abrupt o/w the post cud have gone very long. But yes.. i too think it was abrupt.<br /><br />PS: Frustu... see how coolly I dealt with this criticism. :)ach_85http://www.blogger.com/profile/08571169844443816793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-61076854759914608912009-05-22T21:22:47.967+05:302009-05-22T21:22:47.967+05:30nicely written...though the ending seems arbit as if it has been forced.<br />you just wanted him to have both 'first-times' at the same time...hmmm...hmmmm now is it just a coincidence that you are also alco-virgin :Pzapperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01672174306952935635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-22977964719865714702009-05-22T10:47:33.563+05:302009-05-22T10:47:33.563+05:30what is the problem with that... as mentioned.. this guy wanted to see how he behaves when drunkach_85http://www.blogger.com/profile/08571169844443816793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-59622044759544438312009-05-22T09:03:52.056+05:302009-05-22T09:03:52.056+05:30Well I don't know what to make of this! Someone actually wanted themself taped on their first boozing session?Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11190660141700293947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-21479283691363554252009-05-21T05:39:03.621+05:302009-05-21T05:39:03.621+05:30nahin yaar... i am not flaming... I am just asking for an explanation :Pach_85http://www.blogger.com/profile/08571169844443816793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-23351390404678556042009-05-21T00:24:30.333+05:302009-05-21T00:24:30.333+05:30You probably shouldn't be flaming everyone who leaves a negative comment. People are scared of you anyway :)AllanMcPhrusthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17408883203304390893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-67664985691349535002009-05-20T11:31:54.557+05:302009-05-20T11:31:54.557+05:30This could not have been more stereotypical than this!Musafir...http://www.blogger.com/profile/03126155203830931426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-63790659218990858492009-05-20T00:10:00.000+05:302009-05-20T00:10:00.000+05:30@ fawkes and juhi.... thanks for your responses on the blog. Seriously I dont understand what is bugging you abt the last part. Honestly I think I am the biggest critique of this blog but as I see from a writer's point of view, I see the end justified. <br />I can understand if you found the end abrupt but there are always length constraints on a blog. But thanks anywayach_85http://www.blogger.com/profile/08571169844443816793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-92191254927135318912009-05-19T23:01:00.000+05:302009-05-19T23:01:00.000+05:30Began nicely, but I don't know what happened in the end..Juhinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-24414974028189568632009-05-19T17:46:00.000+05:302009-05-19T17:46:00.000+05:30Nice Idea :) However story didn't turn well at the end.fawkeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14329425021740992511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-88572784039010925662009-05-19T09:26:22.458+05:302009-05-19T09:26:22.458+05:30Actually... i liked the story more than the writing..in fact i did not like the writing.<br />But anyway... glad you liked it.You are one of the few who actually would read it fully :)ach_85http://www.blogger.com/profile/08571169844443816793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-385757119194639259.post-90063793332429481132009-05-19T09:14:00.000+05:302009-05-19T09:14:00.000+05:30Nicely written. Arbit story, but nicely written :)AllanMcPhrusthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17408883203304390893noreply@blogger.com